'The man-eating anaconda once held my heart'. The first sentence immediately got me hooked! This is a very good poem. Keep up the god work :)

Wow.. this is my fave poem so far. The imagery was very vivid and interesting. The constriction she's feeling is really felt in the poem.

"It has constricted my chest in both pleasure and pain." The dichotomy of love. Brilliant!

Great nature/animal imagery throughout. Were the snake references supposed to allude to temptation and the fall of man? If so, it added a nice religious aspect to the piece.

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Wonderful. This has a bit of a change in style
but still very you.
You always have wonderful dark metaphors
I would have used the word "snake" for more effect, but this is my style not yours.
this is wonderful, really enjoyed it.