I love how you used your punctuation. Your brackets. It provided a new perspective of how you can really use punctuation to really punctuate your statement. Wow.

This confused me, but I like the emotions behind it all. Good job!

The anger in this piece is so powerful and yet somewhat controlled. This is a poem that in some ethereal way I can relate to. Well done!

you use VERY unusual images in your poems. they really stand out.

great. i can really feel your emotion.

I really like the emotion you have in this poem. My favorite part of the poem is the third line, it's extremally unique and it just pulls me into the rest of the poem. Great job!

poignant and visual.
"I boil at the thought of sharp April winds"
great.