even going so far as using mythology to get the point across, very very nice. Shame that you had to deal with such an oblivious guy though, hate when that happens. Great symbolism and flow once again, and use of nature to get the flow across, it really is astounding.

I like where you added in poseidon's temple. I have four things for you to review and that is all for now.

I really like the imagery you use, it's fantastic. And the name "Abyss Diver" really fits well. Good job.
xkatt

I like this.. It has a more sophisticated tone, different from most of the teen poetry on this site.

"This monolith need not your love." Oh my goodness! I absolutely adore this line! A mountain is a constant of this Earth, and after love fades from this Earth when we die, it does not budge. Excellent opening line! :D

"You said that you see her in me." A beautiful compliment for the speaker!

"Rhythmic tidal fingers." Great diction!

I liked the allusion to Poseidon at the end; it gave the poem some mythological depth.

Your newer pieces are phenomenal! :O :D!
-Isca