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Reviews For: One Day the Dock Shall Rot
Anaare 2009-04-03 . chapter 1
Wonderful, I enjoyed reading this. The title is what drew me to it, quite enigmatic. I love the symbolism in this piece, well chosen and well written. It also has a great cadence to it. All in all, great work and many thanks for the review.
Moondog Dozier 2009-03-24 . chapter 1
This has a marvelous progression, and internal implied meaning. It's emotional without being overblown and sincere without dripping armchair honesty. Well written. MD:77.
smilebehappy 2009-03-19 . chapter 1
Very powerful and true. I love the style and emotion. Great Job! :)
Elephant-Artist 2009-03-07 . chapter 1
Good poem. You owe me two reviews now.
SakuraLoveXox 2009-02-01 . chapter 1
Hm. I like the tone in this poem, sort of one of lost love.
Fallen Harmony 2009-01-28 . chapter 1
What a pure, beautiful poem. I love the last lines:

"This dock holds me firm,

This dock is my home,

Until all of its wood rots away,

Falling,

Back into the sea." I love it, yet so sorrowful.
You're a great writer.
Le Cosmonaute 2009-01-18 . chapter 1
I'm sorry it's taken ages to return the favour of a review.
I really like this piece. Not having read much of your poetry, I don't think I can comment on consistency of style, or compare it to anything, but it was well written. I especially like the line "Its signal-red sunsets have been silent for days."
Isca 2009-01-14 . chapter 1
"This bleak blank-canvas sky holds no answers." Yes! 'Blank-canvas' sky (a tabula rasa); that's brilliant! A sky born from nothingness. Wonderfully philosophical.

I love your use of kenning throughout! :D

"Until all of its wood rots away..." Sorrowful. Moving. A line that clenches the heart.

EXCELLENT WORK, GUARDRAIL! WOW!
-Isca
Samana 2009-01-13 . chapter 1
very very good.
poetry at its purest.
your poetry never ceases to thrill me.
wonderful, pure, expression.
Favorited.
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