I liked this! The rhyming was very good and I liked te imagery.

OMG! this is so me. lol, jk. but really... i'd love for that to happen. it'd be so freeing

wow i love this, it tells a great story. sometimes i wish the rain would take me away. =) it's got a pretty straight foreward rhyme scheme but it's very effective.

That's really beautiful. I love the way the rhyme doesn't seem forced. A lot of the time, rhyming poems don't feel natural to me, but this one really does. I really enjoyed it

Wow. Beautiful and amazing.

fly fee.~eraced~

Wow, very nice! I really like this one. :)

This song has a very nice flow. It both rhymes and makes sense. Good job!

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