   Morwain 2006-05-03 . chapter 1pretty poem I like |
 Karine Dragon'sheart 2006-04-29 . chapter 1I love owls! And the only time I've seen one is in the day on Animal Planet...*pouts* Laters, KD |
 greenfroggies 2003-07-08 . chapter 1Not your best, but still well worth reading and reviewing! I totally love all of your stuff! |
 Zainab 2003-06-06 . chapter 1I like this one! Nice description |
 just like me 2003-05-13 . chapter 1*yay*It's there! (not like the other poem). Really good. |
 noname18 2003-01-18 . chapter 1that was awesome! it's so short....yet so filling and mystrious....good work there... |
 Keep it 100 2002-12-15 . chapter 1Good description.
~Heart of the Sword |
 wqwq 2002-08-12 . chapter 1 beautiful though I like your non-haiku poems better |
 Apoc/Cerberus 2002-08-10 . chapter 1wow! |
 moonbunny38 2002-05-27 . chapter 1beautiful, once again. |
 lady alpha 2002-05-20 . chapter 1I like the contrast between the first and the last line. I imagine the golden shimmer to be very fast, a matter of seconds, and the floating feather at the end to be almost static. |
| playergurl 2002-05-19 . chapter 1 Okay... it's good... |
 not sure yet 2002-05-18 . chapter 1very pretty |
 Red Rose Petals 2002-04-04 . chapter 1COOL! LIKE LIKE LIKE...etc (u get da idea rite?) |
 Yue Kage 2002-04-02 . chapter 1you don't give yourself enough credit in you bio. This is a good poem. |
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