I don't like Noelle. For some reason she and Nathan just feel wrong together... Maybe it's because of everything that happened in Equinox, he just can't be with anyone else. But that's just what I think... It is good to see him happy(ish) again, but something feels wrong. But I'm only on the first chapter, so I could be taking my words back, we'll see : )

Oh man. Once again just beautiful. And so incredibly hard to read because of the weight of emotion it instills... Just AMAZING. Get these published. Seriously.

there is a need for some editing as there are a few typos and grammatical errors that are detracting but...

oh man. just beautiful...

hey...i was just wondering...when did nathan get a job? or his job back? because somehow he just stopped teaching and he was at raina's house but then now he's working again? explain? :)

So, I really liked this story. I kinda wish there was a little blurb about how Raina was doing. Did they become friends after the funeral? What happened? The world wants to know! (or at least me). Also I think how quickly they fell back into being friends/normal was unrealistic. Just my personal thoughts.

Still good though. Good read.

Hey, I just finished reading this. I read Equinox first as Pearlinthemist and I just was clicking through fp one day and came across this. There's something so compelling about Nathan like a wild thunderstorm. But you know, I think the story turned out perfectly. Life is like that, a puzzle that you put together until finally you stand and look back at it. I'm glad Nathan turned out the way he did. He seems so real in my mind, so vivid and vibrant. Your stories are some of the best to read, but they put me in sad moods.
Keep writing, I'll be reading.

You know...Equinox is my favorite story on this site and I was really reluctant to see my favorite characters not being together. At first it felt wrong but your writing is magic. I could really emphasize with Nathan and Raina. I was feeling every emotion they were experiencing. It didn't feel like these characters are just made up. They're alive and living and choosing on their own. There is a past and reason for everything they do. Each character is precisely worked out, not stereotypical at all! You gave them these little things that make them who they are. John is a cool guy and I loved his friendship with Nathan. Noelle is a nice woman and I can't complain that she's Nathans wife. In my head she can't compare with Raina but in my case it's already a feat that I'm not loathing her! XD All the babies are very cute. Still I think that dealing with toddlers at the age of Eli end Ella is way more stressful than you made it seem. They tend to disobey all the time and they get stubborn, and stuff. They test their limits. Or at least that's how it is with my niece and nephew who I baby-sit often. There are two more things I'd like to nag about. Firstly what happened to Raina? There's no mention of her in the epilogue. Is Aaron still barring Raina and Nathan from keeping in touch? Is Raina happy again? How's she doing in church? Secondly the birth of Nevaeh in the woods. Do you really think giving birth is that easy or is Noelle just special? Without any kind of medication, it must have hurt like hell. She was somehow way too composed. I'd be hysterical. Did she skip the afterpains also? Sorry, but I just thought you might want to know. The story in itself is indescribably beautiful and please don't alter it too much when you edit it!! There are really only teensy-weensy, minor mistakes. You did an amazing job and if you were the publish Equinox and Pearl of Great Price I'd be the first to buy them!! You got so much talent! Don't waste it!!
Phew, now I'm out of breath^^

Dang.

Aaron's perfect forgiving side finally cracks. It's okay though, I can forgive him. He's tried so hard.

Man, poor Aaron.

This is an amazing story. It made me feel so many different things, and it is just beautiful beautiful beautiful. :)
bye!!

Whoops! Just realised that fp doesn't show email addresses.

Plz send me the soundtrack (the email is in my profile... just enabled "Display Email" just so you can view it lol).

And do tell me about Daughters and Sons... I'm sorry if I missed any author's note but is it getting published? Is that why it's down?

Good luck!

Arg! You. Ugh. I'm angry with you because I did nothing but read Equinox and this all day yesterday. And I can't even say it was a waste. I absolutely love your story.

I have a slight request, though.

I don't even know if you've finished this yet or not (I refuse to let myself peak at the last chapter) but could you pretty, pretty please tie in that joke at the beginning at the end or something? Please? I can just see Nathan with his head pressed to a window mumbling "It's rainy outside" before crying. Even if you don't use it that way, the joke? Please? x3

Any-ways~! Keep updating!
-Ali

SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL!!

I cried just about every chapter of this. I'm so happy Nathan finally found peace, it was so heartbreaking reading his story. But I loved every bit of it!

Thanks for sharing us this wonderful story!

Whoo :] good ending to an amazing story.

I think you'll be a great English teacher!

Wow! It's finished! Awesome ending!

Well I'm glad you capped off his life perfectly and made him happy in the end. This story and Equinox are like my two favorite stories, they're super good! =]

The ending was perfect. Their little family of four is adorable :) I would love to hear the soundtrack!

O I want the playlist! \

Great story and I'm glad it was a happy ending, Idk what I'd do if it ended horribly
Loved it!