This is so awesome. I love the dark nature of it and the love theme, and of course the way they interact. Such a great story, I really enjoyed it.

Wow this is so, so good that I really don't know where to start.. Have always been a fan of your writings, but this certainly takes the cake, no fight.

I love everything about this short story.. From the riveting plot that twists every so often, to the realistic characters who are unique and thus memorable.. Most of all, I love the way how the story progresses so seamlessly. The dialogues, the vivid descriptions.. You have such a talent for words! They just flow, like water. It's refreshing :D

And I also love how the ending is so bittersweet. Sure, Sabine won't be alone, for now. Nathaniel is mortal, he won't live forever like Sabine would. Hence I wonder what would happen to Sabine if Nathaniel had to die one day. For that, I'd love for you to write a sequel to this, to know how things would turn out for the two of them; but I'm not sure if their love story could ever have a happy ending.

Sigh. I really enjoyed this piece! It's a short vampire story like no other. You've weaved this story really really well, thanks for writing it and giving me such a good read!

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I really like this story! I cant wait for more!