Okay.

Hell. You can sing. I listened to it on youtube, and I wont say I didnt cry. That was brilliant and completely touching. I just want to hug you!

The emotion in this really makes it work, as the reader, or the listener in the case of song, can connect with what the speaker-singer is going through by the depth of the feelings presented. Good write. MD:77.

Whoah. I'm impressed...I feel like this song zoned in exactly on your feelings. The line "I can’t argue my way in"...that's going to be stuck in my head for a while.

Keep it up!

-Pammy

This, I believe, is one of the best, if not the best, thing I have read on this site. It does an excellent job of expressing emotions, and tugs on all the right heart strings.

I must ask, have you ever considered writing songs like this, professionally?

how odes it sound! I want to hear it!