Yes, more chapters! This is such an amazing story, and I love how it is a joint story and has two sides to it. I've never read a story written this way before, and I'm absolutely addicted to it. Please keep updating, I can't wait to find out what happens next. You guys are some of my favorite authors. Keep up the gorgeous writing!

Ok, so when I first read the summary, I was like, "oho, what tis this be?" So I clicked on the link, and about three or four paragraphs in, I had to go back and reread the summary! I was thinking,"Holy shit! Wasn't this going to be a romantically cheesie storie about some boy/girl trying to fit in in the 21st century?! " Not according that chapter! Holy crap, that was INTENSE!
*cough*
I'm going to go back to reading your story that is awesomely-more-awesome-than-I-thought-a-story-could-be now...

It's beautiful! *exagerates

I always fall in love with your stories, haha. I'm glad you decided to continue this. I think the difference between Colt and Harper makes their characters more lovable.

A hijacking? This story has everything. Romance, adventure, bad guys, oh and Colt. Can't forget him.

Harper and Colt are together now. Aww!

Great story girls!

Lol. that wasn't too subtle. hehe. and i liked last chapter. nice and long.


update soon. :)

Huh, she was on fire, apparently.

I love the idea of this story your writing and the style it's very good and nice to read well done :)

Very unusual story, and I've always loved the best-friends cliche. XD I like the plot too, not too romancy and mush filled. Gah, perfect humans...what's sad is that people WANT it in real life too, so this might not just remain fiction...

- HT

hehehehehe. i would have gone physical with that random girl at the airport. are people really that confident and intruding now days? it's so embarrassing to live in a society like that. . .


really good by the way. and funny. . . google? how dare he make fun of one of my favourite search engine.

update soon.

gravity-mass resistance? you actually seem to know what your writing about. i really like that. and adds flavour to the stuff that doesn't pertain to the romance parts of stories.

The summary is a little ambiguous but I decided to read it anyway and I'm glad I did. Very well-written, mature style. Every so often I get a little lost in your long sentences, but not very often. I like long sentences, if I were you I might use some semicolons more, they'd help. I'm interested in seeing how this turns into a romance. This is not what I usually read and that's exactly what I was looking for, something a little different.

Yay! New chapters! I love this story so much! I'm so happy that its going back up again!

Love Sheen

O! I just found out this story was back and it makes me so happy!

Love Sheen

I loved this story when it use to be up on quizilla, its a mircale that I happened upon it here on fictionpress. I cant wait to continue reading from where you left off. I hope there would be no more waiting =).

I like the attitude in this story. Even though it's not really the same, it kinda reminds me of Ender's Game. Ever heard of it? Really good book by Orson Scott Card if you're fine with Sci-fi. And even if you aren't really into it... still.

Good job, by the way.