"Sometimes, I wish she could stand me." Aww! This line is so sad! The poem is very relatable and honest. Keep up the good work! :)

Great job. Sad, but well written piece. Very real. You seem like an amazing person, so it's her own fault for not speaking with you. She's missing out :)

Faith

Beautifully written. The emotion just reaches out and touches you. I love the words you chose to use, they really impact the reader!

Dreaming Chica

beautiful, just beautiful. The last two lines were just so well put, and worded. ahh, keep it up :)

this poem is great, I don't particulally like the song bit at the beginning but because i'm not really into that kind of music, but thats just my opinion of why I personly don't like it. I love the idea thought because its really realistic, you love someone who can't stand you, I especially like the last line because it really brings the poem to a good finish :) it's really good though, your a fab writer :)