always take, never give

its edgy.

You have no idea how refreshing it is to read things that are real, this doesnt even hint at icing sugar coating. Its dark, and biting and im just about gobsmacked.

A different story, but I liked it. Good job!

I get the feeling that he never looks her in the eyes...
Beautifully written.

As with most of your works I'm not one hundreed percent sure what the hell your talking about but nonetheless I love it. What I do understand about this piece si what meakes me love it because she keeps giving herself to him and he takes more and that for me makes it rather poetic. Anywho I wish you the best of luck on your publication. You have a lot of talent and I hope you get to unleash it on the world. haha

Wow.