|Reviews for Pilsburry Doughgirl|
| Isca 1/16/09 . chapter 1
You took a cliche topic, and made it your own, so kudos for that!
The third stanza is incredibly well-written! The structure and diction is wonderful!
"It's amazing how she even fits into her chair." Poor girl! This is definitely a good example of the harsh reality of adolescent life!
"But the mullet at the front understands." I love that you ended the poem on a semi-happy note; perhaps, even with the potential of 'the mullet' becoming friends with 'the earthquake goddess'? I hope so.
| tangerine dreamer 1/15/09 . chapter 1
i feel the awkwardness of this girl and also her desperate stab at being normal. your descriptions are very blunt, maybe uncomfortable to some, but it fits the topic at hand. i love the last line. nicely done!