 Doctor Dreamscape 2009-08-18 . chapter 4Interesting. It leaves one to wonder what part the sisters have to play in the unfolding tale.
If I may make a suggestion, I feel like the characters are very plain. I can't really find a difference in their personalities. And that's half the fun, knowing which characters you can relate to and like, and which ones to route for.
Keep up the good work!
-D.D. |
 Tomiko90 2009-03-12 . chapter 2Ooh interesting! It's like they're reading a life they forgot about! You always end the chapters in a way that makes the reader want more! I hope you continue this soon! |
 Tomiko90 2009-03-12 . chapter 1My goodness, it has been such a long time since I have read anything!
I could have sworn I read this before!
Interesting first chapter! I like where it's going so far, I'll keep reading! |
 FallenAngelFromTheSky 2009-01-27 . chapter 2O.O and the storyline progresses! getting much better, as stated before, update ASAP! |
 FallenAngelFromTheSky 2009-01-27 . chapter 1okay, sorry for not reading it till now, i just haven't been on the computer for a while. anyway, much better than the first. your sentences are getting more flowy, still choppy, but MUCH better, i bow down to you, oh mighty authoress! (fake bows) |
 Doctor Dreamscape 2009-01-18 . chapter 2The plot thickens. Are you strengthening the romance in this version (not a suggestion or a criticism, just curiosity :))
Keep up the fabulous work!
-The Captain |
 Doctor Dreamscape 2009-01-15 . chapter 1Nice beginning. I hope the rest is just as good.
Keep up the good work!
-Captain Dark |