|Reviews for Surra|
| Guest 9/12/12 . chapter 8
I cant believe he did that!
| Goldden eyes 9/11/12 . chapter 4
i LOVED the last part!
| Goldden eyes 9/10/12 . chapter 2
| Sword And Sorcery 3/9/10 . chapter 8
What a wonderful story, or idea, or whatever! I really love the intricate plot that you tell here.
Now I can't wait to see what happens when they meet Narin!
| James Michaelis 11/12/09 . chapter 7
I like how you built up to it, telling the story and the memories, combining them at the end of this chapter.
Can't wait to read more!
| BlankpageEagerpen 11/12/09 . chapter 7
I liked it, it was very different and quite enjoyable!
Eck that sounds weird! anyway great story bye!
| James Michaelis 11/11/09 . chapter 6
Very interesting. I can't wait to see what happens.
You write about the spy very well. I have suspicions, but I feel like there's some sort of twist. You're keeping me on my toes. Well done!
| James Michaelis 8/18/09 . chapter 4
Interesting. It leaves one to wonder what part the sisters have to play in the unfolding tale.
If I may make a suggestion, I feel like the characters are very plain. I can't really find a difference in their personalities. And that's half the fun, knowing which characters you can relate to and like, and which ones to route for.
Keep up the good work!
| Tomiko90 3/12/09 . chapter 2
Ooh interesting! It's like they're reading a life they forgot about! You always end the chapters in a way that makes the reader want more! I hope you continue this soon!
| Tomiko90 3/12/09 . chapter 1
My goodness, it has been such a long time since I have read anything!
I could have sworn I read this before!
Interesting first chapter! I like where it's going so far, I'll keep reading!
| FallenAngelFromTheSky 1/27/09 . chapter 2
O.O and the storyline progresses! getting much better, as stated before, update ASAP!
| FallenAngelFromTheSky 1/27/09 . chapter 1
okay, sorry for not reading it till now, i just haven't been on the computer for a while. anyway, much better than the first. your sentences are getting more flowy, still choppy, but MUCH better, i bow down to you, oh mighty authoress! (fake bows)
| James Michaelis 1/18/09 . chapter 2
The plot thickens. Are you strengthening the romance in this version (not a suggestion or a criticism, just curiosity :))
Keep up the fabulous work!
| James Michaelis 1/15/09 . chapter 1
Nice beginning. I hope the rest is just as good.
Keep up the good work!