I didn't really like beginning it with ellipses, it didn't really seem to fit with the piece. I also didn't like using the slang in the title. It almost made me not want to read it it. The other thing is I think you could use a bit more punctuation.

I liked the first line a lot though. Combining bleed and tears worked well and wasn't too cliched. I also like how you used thousand and hundred. That was a nice complementary thing.

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I like it. It's simple, but strong. Good job.
Faith