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tower walls
Unforgettable-PoeticDreamer
2009-03-21 . chapter 1
You are very talented with words. This poem seems to have a lyrical aspect and seems to flow like a song. Nice work with this piece.
Lady Fingers
2009-01-19 . chapter 1
you and I both know that you can't trust anyone
don't bother trying to
turn me towards the sun.
i decided upon darkness long before the night had come.
great line
softersin
2009-01-15 . chapter 1
Two favorite lines;
"i'll unhook your little fingers from the fault lines to watch you fall."
&
"i decided upon darkness long before the night had come"
You're talented.
keep it up.
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