 OrosGirl 2009-05-11 . chapter 1Darling this story is so touching...I love it! |
 Irresistible Apple 2009-01-28 . chapter 1Wow Star, this is beautiful. A lot of meaning to it. I love it!
-Apple |
 Silver the Thirteenth 2009-01-18 . chapter 1All things either born ugly and made beautiful, or born beautiful and made ugly. Thus is the nature of life.
If that made any since. |
 The Wandering Soul of Chaos 2009-01-17 . chapter 1Very good. So much meaning behind this...good job! Keep it up. |
 painted eyes 2009-01-17 . chapter 1This is excellent, it creates two contrasting emotions for the reader all at once: Sympathy for the narrator [for their personal feelings], then joy for them as their admirer has recognised that they ARE beautiful... sorry, that was more of a run-down of the haiku than an actual review.
Real review here: This is very clever, and very sweet, a key-hole into many people's personal experiences.
~painted |
 Dreaming Chica 2009-01-16 . chapter 1Simple words with a big impact! Well done!
♥ Dreaming Chica ♥ |
 tangerine dreamer. 2009-01-15 . chapter 1i love it. i cna relate to this, not feeling pretty even though someone else might tell you so. nicely done. =) |
 brunettelitlover 2009-01-15 . chapter 1Short, sweet, and beautifully written. Very nice job. |