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Reviews For: I'm Not Beautiful
OrosGirl 2009-05-11 . chapter 1
Darling this story is so touching...I love it!
Irresistible Apple 2009-01-28 . chapter 1
Wow Star, this is beautiful. A lot of meaning to it. I love it!
-Apple
Silver the Thirteenth 2009-01-18 . chapter 1
All things either born ugly and made beautiful, or born beautiful and made ugly. Thus is the nature of life.

If that made any since.
The Wandering Soul of Chaos 2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Very good. So much meaning behind this...good job! Keep it up.
painted eyes 2009-01-17 . chapter 1
This is excellent, it creates two contrasting emotions for the reader all at once: Sympathy for the narrator [for their personal feelings], then joy for them as their admirer has recognised that they ARE beautiful... sorry, that was more of a run-down of the haiku than an actual review.
Real review here: This is very clever, and very sweet, a key-hole into many people's personal experiences.

~painted
Dreaming Chica 2009-01-16 . chapter 1
Simple words with a big impact! Well done!

♥ Dreaming Chica ♥
tangerine dreamer. 2009-01-15 . chapter 1
i love it. i cna relate to this, not feeling pretty even though someone else might tell you so. nicely done. =)
brunettelitlover 2009-01-15 . chapter 1
Short, sweet, and beautifully written. Very nice job.
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