Awesome story!
The plot isn't quite like the other vampire stuff I've seen--it's much better. And I love the names--they destroy my own name ideas by tenfold. The whole thing is written beautifully too--it keeps you hooked until the end.
Good job!

I just loved this story, it was very elegant and planned. I've never heard the song you were inspired by, but one doesn't need to know the song in order to enjoy this piece. I didn't know what a Drow was but I still liked the story as well.

I would have liked to know more about Evander, because it doesn't tell much about him. Though I suppose we don't need to know anything more about him, you've told enough for his part in the story. They end up together in the end, which is a lovely ending.

One thing I didn't like was the ... you would use. Sometimes I think it was alright to use them, mostly when fading into the memories; but other than that, I really don't like to see them. A comma or period can replace that ... and it looks so much nicer and propper.

It was a beautiful read however, perhaps not long enough but just right at the same time. Everything is told how it should be, but I wouldn't mind losing myself for a day in a long book of this story. Thank you for the good read,
-Alice