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PoetryQueen 1/16/09 . chapter 1I LOVE this! Awesome job! I have a few suggestions too. 1. It only takes a moment I would make this But, It only takes a moment. 2. I would break this up into stanzas. 3. I would add And to the last line, like this, And the sun will shine another day. Remember, these are just suggestions. Great job! This is going on my favorites! |
we are miles apart 1/15/09 . chapter 1it was good. well, for me.. change is pretty normal. the only thing that is not certain in this world is Change. :) pls read my works too. :) |