Hi! This has been my second time reading through this whole story. It's just such a wonderful story. I'm actually quite surprised that it doesn't have 10+ reviews. Lucas and Irelyn are such a cute couple. =] And I just adore Lucas! This story is definitely one I will remember forever. I've read this story before, so I remembered it like yesterday, and I was like, hey where's that story that I read before that I loved so much? Haha. The story is perfect. Thanks for posting it!

I just happened to be stumbling through some author's favorite stories lists and I found this little gem. Your style is very real and very easy to relate to. I love how the main character is a writer, it adds alot to the story. I'm really enjoying this story and can't wait to finish it :).
-Charlotte

It's absolutely amazing!
Their chemistry is SO good!;)
And well... There were two song that this story made me think of... "Priscilla Renea - Dollhouse". heres an link /watch?v=mT7GuYLpCLE&feature=subtivity
And "the cab - can you keep a secret" link /watch?v=Jc5RmcxI6co&feature=PlayList&p=F9BF31CFDC07854D&playnext=1&playnext_from=PL&index=5.
I'm going to read the sequel now;)
Buh bye
Liz

Great story! The best M rated I've read so far. The plot was really exciting and cute but mst of all I love your characters! Well done!

This was really good! I found it on SKOW and I'm so happy I did! This was such a delectable story and the plot was actually pretty original. Yes, there were the typical romantic cliches of indecision and overbearing adults, but you approached it kind of differently and I liked that. I certainly hope you've written a sequel or are writing one, because I'll definitely read it!

FCUK!

About effing time!

Luke belives in her, doesnt patronize her, is sweet and loving and understanding and yet she's still confused? she's dumb...

“I just want the bad guy to get the girl.”

that litrally broke my heart... i got misty eyes... GOD DAMNIT STUPID DUSTIN!

Wonderful story. :)
Just read from start to end, haha. :D

oh wow, that's a great story! i absolutely love it! ~ Alenor

i love this story! well written and a very good cliché! Lucas and Collin and Spencer are the best!
charlotte

OMG! This is a great ! LUV IT!

BTW, I live in Australia and Australia's a great country but I LOVE America! Opposite to you huh?

Australia's pretty much like America, got cities and cars and fancy buildings in the main city area, but for me, I love America!

I loved it! :D Very anxious when Irelyn couldn't decide- and then the fall was extreme awesome for drama :D

So, I'm not sure why your stories don't have one-thousand+ reviews. I've read a handful of them now and I've been thoroughy impressed with them all. Just wanted to leave a quick review saying that. I'm always totally impressed with you main guy characters and while I haven't followed a story while you are writing it, just by looking at the dates from story start to finish, you must keep your readers happy by updating so often and quickly! Anyway, loved the story! Look forward to reading more!