That ending is so scary. But wow, the story is awesome. It was so cute when she first started liking the boy and it maked me sad that he ended up killing her. It was so awesome though. ^_^

Really nice, unique idea. I like that it has a journalistic style of writing to it.

Ooh. Very well written, and it has a nice Twilight Zone feeling to it. I also like that the characters don't have names.