WOW this kinda reminded me of chess! was that what you were trying to do? if it was then it worked, i LOVED it! :)

this is a realy good story

Wow. That was...jeez, I don't even know how to describe that...in a good way, though! :) Is the game chess?

that wuz gud

lol

reminded me of asda's story

um party quest place with all those chesspieces...

ino u remember that ;o

im such a loser. _.

good story

That was a very fascinating read, so filled with imagery that I could see it playing in my head as I read each word. Good job!

What a fascinating story. Very unique idea, that's for sure, and you executed it well. It's ambiguous and escapist, and very enjoyable to read.

This is pretty interesting, although a little confusing.

You might have wanted to explain how they fell in love or something. But then it's a chess game. What do I expect? .

Anyway, original piece of work.