|Reviews for Paranormal Activity|
| pretty colours 1/18/09 . chapter 1
ive read a few of ure poems but they dont seem to catch my imagination! sorry lol good poems though:)
| Decoris Verbum 1/18/09 . chapter 1
Brought by the Review Marathon - link in profile.
I liked the "shh"'s, because it really made the reader feel like THEY were being spoken to. However, I didn't like how "seen" is italicized, because it seemed unnecessary to the poem as a whole.