aw well that was cute and so great i loved EAHoDSC but i think i liked this one more. the bad ass fell for her hard
i loved it and great to see some charlie and adelaide in there too.
i cant wait for the others especially's erin's story that is going to be interesting.
very awesome story

I LOVE this. The tone is captured just perfectly and i cant help but keep reading and reading. I think for such a short story you really captured the characters well; Greg, Pris (a little flat, but otherwise okay), Erin.
loves it.
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I love Greg, really I do. But is it terrible of me if i love Charlie a bit more?
:)

Great one shot

That was so good. Really, I loved it.

Ha ha, I love Greg. ;)

I loved this. It was absolutely great. Can't wait to read the "sequel" to Hide or Die, too. I love your writing. :)

Brilliant. :)
Characters, plot, well, just about everything was excellent.

Congrats!

ooh i love this
and now finding that it's the SECOND in a series
i'm definitely addicted
despite not having read the first one
i loved it
i love greg and pris, so adorable together
can't wait for the future installments

izzie

Normally I don't like older woman romances, but yours was done so well (I love all your stuff, so that's that), and I really seriously loved this. Of course I want Charlie's story (saw the excerpt - you should definitely elaborate on the gummy bears and maybe she should refuse at first? I don't know. It's fun when you torture the Harrises), but this great. Pris is such a good match for Greg, ahaha. And Erin is awesome, as usual (you should write her a story too!), so that's that. (:
Not much else to say, except I'm very jealous xoxluurve added this to our c2 before I had a chance to.

Loved it.

Yay for the Harris boys! Another one? :D

I love you. A lot.

That's pretty much all it comes down to.

Hey there! I found this through "for the love of one shots" community. I like how you managed to follow all the challenge requirements and I'd be willing to read more about these characters if all the family members are this much fun. I think it was well-written, though there were a few slips, but nothing big or noticeable. The ending was specially funny with his father and all, that was priceless - and I liked especially like how the father didn't get offended or anything like that. Greg and Priscilla have chemistry and sound believable. Good job overall.

I loved it!

I loved this one too!! The Harris make me laugh like crazy, and I love how Greg was the main character of this one. Priscilla was hilarious, and they are just too perfect for each other.

Great job!

wow i had so much fun reading this :) i love how the story was light hearted and fun but at the same time there was an underlining of deeper more heavier problems. The entire story also just really flowed together really well. I remember reading your 11th hide or die challenge response over and over again and it was so great to read about the harris family and addles again. even though both are one-shots the characters really did stick with me. Hopefully the next one will be about erin. keep up the great work :)