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frogs of war 2009-02-21 . chapter 1
This story is so complicated as are my feelings about it.

His dad is a jerk no matter how nice he really is. As a person raised in a house where a child was molested, I practically jumped for joy when Dexter gave up on his dad. You made it all feel so good and natural when I knew it wasn't, that the feeling Dex had were hurting him.

Yeah for Richard, who is wonderful just by being himself.
Rachizzle 2009-01-21 . chapter 1
loved it.
Mya 2009-01-19 . chapter 1
I was reading this when the story suddenly ended half-way through like in the middle of a sentence. It confused me for a minute before I realized it didn't upload all the way. So I clicked 'refresh' and got to finish the story! Yay. lol. I didn't see anything wrong grammer-wise (or plot-wise ^^) but you know how I am with grammer...
Twin Eclipse 2009-01-18 . chapter 1
*pur* love! *sigh* love his persona and how he doesn't hold it against his dad in the end, richard sounds fun to! some kind of sequal please?
Naomi Schemer 2009-01-18 . chapter 1
Dexter is a cool cat. Always has been, always will be. Let's hope things go well for him and Richard. Yeah, I remember this one.
Crimsonvampirewerewolf 2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Wow this is a good one you should totally continue it :)
Sugar Coated Lemons 2009-01-17 . chapter 1
Aw. poor guy. that must be devastating.

brilliant writing, once again.
giRLAddiCted 2009-01-17 . chapter 1
AH! UPDATE!
I love this.
Slightly dusturbing and hits too close to home but...LOVE IT!!
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