I forgot to mention it earlier but I love the writing/writer element to this. Strangely for a writing site it doesn't come up as much as one would think. Nice conversation between Carter and Andy. It really shows their relationship and how things have changed and what, if anything is the same. Hurrah. Can't wait for more.

Boo Carter. You do a fabulous job developing your characters and revealing the past through flashbacks and current events. I like what has changed so far and look forward to seeing how everything all plays out.

I agree, Damn Bastard. :) The plot is floating along nicely and do I sense sextual tension between Andy and Henry? Maybe a little? Or maybe I'm just a fan of the best friend cliche and reading into things.

You have a knack for dialogue and you interweave your flashbacks flawlessly. I love how they help develop the characters and keep me wanting to know more about them. The Sadie Hawkins girl reminded me of the song by Relient K, ironically they met at a dance :) Great job, onward I go.

I love the way you write this. It almost sounds like some of my favorite television shows, with that little voice over bit at the begining. You capture universal truths and emotions really well and I can feel for your characters. Great job.

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I literally stumbled across this and I'm so glad I did. Lovely story,writing and characters. I'm not sure whether I want her with Carter or Henry. But if she does get back with Carter I hope he grovels and pays for hurting her first. Update please.

Your story had me hooked from the prolouge! I really love it; you are such a good writer :D
Carter is truly an **; I don't like him very much. I think he should jump off a cliff and 'accidentally' land on Sadie Hawkins (when I saw her name, I laughed, haha).
Andrea should definitely end up with Henry. He and Andrea are my favorite characters so far. She deserves him~!
Please update soon!

"queue jaw dropping" --> shouldn't that be "cue"

and i like this chapter cuz it shows carter's audacity... but i just wanted to say you lost me a little because you didnt really describe the setting or even give a little clue as to where they're meeting at that last part. (Or maybe i just missed it.)

anyways, good chapter..can't wait for the next one.

You're flipping back and forth between first person and third person. Example : "I rolled her eyes..." It should be I rolled my eyes. There were other sentances and parts of the story that were like that to. Example: "She let out a frustrated breath..." were in the paragraph before it you put "I clenched my jaw, furious by that point." I like this story so I just wanted to inform you of your grammar mistakes.

ha, I was no expecting the time jump, but it was good!

sadie hawkins...lol..what an odd name
and her laptop's name is herbert? thats cute

but anyways on to the real point of my review..i just wanted to mention that there was a couple places where you switched from 1st person to third person...no big deal, thought i'd just let you know

Hm, I'm really intrigued by this and wondering where you'll go with it. The flashbacks are very nice but you kind of lost me in chapter 4. I didn't realize it was like a year and a half later until I got to the very bottom and read your note. It was kind of a choppy transition from chapter 3 to 4--but the content was still wonderful. =] update soon.

: ) I love this story.
it's been great so far.
Keep up the good work, and update quicker please. Pretty please with a cherry on top ! : )

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I can't say anything much about this except for that I absolutely LOVE it.

Leaves me speechless. :]

Henry seems like a really sweet person.

Update soon? :'D