Dreams dwell within the sky
Reality ties you to the ground...This one told me of how we all have faults, no, we are born with thos faults as part of our existence, but always strive for that which we know we cannot reach. Yeah, really cool!

~SD

I like it:) "Paper wings, with rips and tears/always make us fall" Great job!
Write on!

I love what you're saying with this piece! I've often felt the same way. More punctuation is needed (especially the last line), otherwise, it detracts from the message. I would have preferred that the first words of the lines not all be capitalized. I find it somewhat distracting. I am overjoyed at seeing the dash included! HOORAY FOR A DASH!

i love this one =] 1. because i would LOVE to be able to fly, it would be so cool! and 2. because of the meaning of this. what i got from it was that we can't really just fly away from all of our problems, but imagining that we can gives us hope to carry on.

i love the imagery as well, it creates a clear picture in my mind of a person trying to run (fly away) from his probems but he keeps crashing back down.

it's lovely =] nice work with this