Very predicable.
]still curious to see what happens

First love and rebond boyfriend? I smell trouble!

Short introduction, but it says a lo´t.

PB

Ooh! Cliffhanger ending to the chapter! Omg that familiarness was really well written it reminded me so much of when you se someone youre sure you recognise from somewhere, but cant work it out. It was very nice :)

Cool first chapter :) Im reading on. Its an original idea, and I really like it so far :P

Nice, it sounds interesting. I'm already wanting to read more!

Ara
xoxo

Oh~ intruging!! what happens?

great chappy
cant wait for more
hope you update soon
--ifly*hugs*

Interesting! I wonder what's going to happen now.
Ryan seems sweet and she seems to ba happy~ But well, Darien hasn't forgotten Arielle, has he? :p *curious*

*add to story alert*

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I love it. Pleeze update soon!

Interesting concept. Certainly sounds like it could be a good concept - though I would have enjoyed a little more detail in this first instalment, particularly with the emotions and circumstances of the narrator. But it's a good start for an aspiring writer. I hope you continue.

Hm...I assume this chapter's an introduction to your story? It's interesting, really. And it would have been more catching if you made it a little longer.

Anyway, good luck with this one! :)

I like it.
It sounds interesting.
Continue?
-ilymtwces

this is a really intruging start~ I wonder where you take the story!
Narq.

Hello!!
Well your story is interesting at the first sight, but are you continue with it because is really short the first chapter.
If you are continue with it(that´s what i hope) do it soon please.
SEE´YA
BYE