Wow. All I can say. It's AMAZING! Distopias and utopias always interest me, because I think they're pretty much the same thing. Have you ever read Brave New World? I think it's by Aldous Huxeley.

... Getting off topic

I especially love the characters and their powers, it reminds me of Maximum Ride (says the girl whose read too many books).

I hope there's going to be a new chapter soon!