|Reviews for Łopuchowo Forest|
| Elephant-Artist 3/8/09 . chapter 1
That is a good poem. I do not know what else to tell you. Please read and review my stuff.
| burning in effigy 1/17/09 . chapter 1
hey you. long time no... type/talk/etc.
i like the small storyline you have set up here... especially with personifying the trees. they always seem to have that "wisdom" aspect (i've watched lord of the rings too many times?), and i like how in your poem, you show them as almost helpless.
the fourth stanza was simple but effective. you get right to the heart of the matter, and it's almost hard to read because you've put it so bluntly that people were murdered for no real reason. (i'm assuming the poem is about the holocaust. if i'm wrong.. oops. sorry)
and the ending was omgwonderful. sad, strong and perfect.
only thing: in the third stanza, last line, i think you forgot a period because all the other lines have punctuation at the end.
(i'm going to poland this summer and this is inspiring)