i rly like it haha its awesome

col, you should do a sequel to this.

Ooh, I like, I like! Homicidal twins are always creepy. There's something very Children of the Corn about some of the lines, it's awesome. I can tell it was a one page limit because of the elaborate, somewhat poetic set-up and straight forward end. It'd be so cool if you were to expand this. I love the names to.

By the way, what was the English assignment? =]

Very interesting, I especially liked that last line about the demons...Keep up the good work ^_^

Wow! That was really good! Better than what I could of ever attempted to write. Just amazing.