This is very well written, with few errors (no big ones). It's also very interesting. You've got quite a society planned out here, with the aliens and goblins and such. But somehow this chapter feels like a prologue. It's as if you're telling instead of showing the entire time, and although it's a great read, it feels incomplete and somehow not quite real because of it.

Still, I want to see where you're going with this! It's intriguing so far, and I want to read more. :) Nice work.

Also, thank you very much for the review of my story.