 Your Own Personal Jesus 2009-11-27 . chapter 28Aw, Marisa was cute. I love seeing Zander get better and what not. You do a good job at character development, which a lot of other stories tend to lack. Ah, your reply made me more excited to see what happens when Zander sees Gwen again. Sounds like it's going to be rather...eventful.
I actually did spread the word somewhat. I left a link on my friends profile on facebook because she wanted to read it a few days again. Regretfully, you probably won't receive a review from her because she's lazy and doesn't have an account.
Good update, I enjoyed it. ^__^ |
 Your Own Personal Jesus 2009-11-27 . chapter 27I LOVE THIS STORY! :D
It's awesome.
At first, I liked Zander, then I reallt didn't. I mean, he is a whiny little brat. But I still felt sorry for him. Now I'm liking him again. At first I didn't like Gary, but I really, really like him now. Although, at first I liked Gwen, but where she was left off, I didn't like her so much. I hate Zanders father and I don't really like his mom that much and I really don't like Alan. XD Kate and Kevin are awesome, and same with Zanders new therapist. I forgot her name though. D:
By the way, this chapter was so cute. :3
I wish this story had more reviews, it's obvious that you put a lot of time into it.
Well, I'll be awaiting your next update! ^_^ |
 xRipped My Heart Outx 2009-11-27 . chapter 17I LOATHE Gary. He is disgusting. BUT- I love this story so much! |
 Rae Simmons 2009-11-22 . chapter 26Well he's sorta getting better, it seems like he's almost entirely forgotten about the... "incidents"... I wonder how long that will last though... -ponders- |
 Liebe Dance 2009-11-21 . chapter 1This seriously made me want to cry. Totally hooking. Can't wait to read the rest! |
 no.peace.los.angeles 2009-11-21 . chapter 1Oh, I feel so bad for Alex. :( Poor kid. His mom is clearly this woman who doesn't know anything about parenting, and he's way too grown up for being in kindergarten . . . So yes, nice work in making me care about the main character from the start, and the only thing I wonder about is if the dialogue isn't too advanced for 5-year-olds? But I suppose, it can't be easy to write from the POV of someone that age. It's hard remembering what it was to be 5. But yes, this is nice. Keep writing! :) |
 Pause Scream and Now Smile 2009-11-08 . chapter 7Haha scene kids. LOL this brings back memories of me being a scene kid lol.Wow..
Isn't it weird how gothic people and scene people tend not to like each other even thought they are kind of in the same style tree/groupies.
Lovely chapter. Gwen is so nice.
Did she use to be a cutter/is a cutter? A sign of cutting is wearing baggy clothing. |
 Pause Scream and Now Smile 2009-11-08 . chapter 6You know, I like the way you make the characters so real. I mean one minute I'm hating them the next minute I'm loving them again. I guess this shows not everyone is completely nice or an **. I'm a bit tired so sorry if my reviews don't make sense. |
 Pause Scream and Now Smile 2009-11-08 . chapter 5this is a sad story but i love it so much. |
 Pause Scream and Now Smile 2009-11-08 . chapter 4I'm glad Alan helped him. I seriously want to give this kid a hug. |
 Pause Scream and Now Smile 2009-11-08 . chapter 3aww I feel sorry for him, his mom is super not understanding. Sadly i can relate this character to one of my best friends =/ |
 Pause Scream and Now Smile 2009-11-08 . chapter 2I really like the character development. I like Gwen =) I totally love your story! |
 Pause Scream and Now Smile 2009-11-08 . chapter 1ahh, I feel bad for the boy. But this is lovely so far. I really like it. =) |
 Rae Simmons 2009-11-05 . chapter 25Oh no! Not the smelly fruity stuff! Run for your life! -rofl- Aww, this was a pretty fluffy chapter, all things considered. It was nice. ^.^ |
 TheMiddleMan 2009-10-16 . chapter 24I loved this story i just feel like i can connect to a lot of things with Zander... and he is so sweet! You have to keep going with this... I'll kepp on reviewing because i just love this! |