|Reviews for The Three Finger Salute|
| mikey magee 1/18/09 . chapter 1
Wonderful satire! I love the repetition of "Hope, hope, hope" and "pray, pray, pray" in lines 18 and 21. And the Cinderella reference was a nice touch as well. line 24 had the word "hope" in it as well. But I think it would be a little better if you exchanged it for something else. Like "Don't wish for it" or "Don't count on it." Because you already used it three times in line 21.
Other than that, this was an excellent poem!
| Kiwi-kiwi6 1/18/09 . chapter 1
Stupid computers. Why can't they just run right? Good poem, I like it.