Sad, a yearning theme. I really like the repeats, and how you twisted them up. It has good emotion and a sad story. Great job!

-Golmere

Aw, that's so sad. It's really ironic though (and this is some saying that I saw online somewhere, but it goes something like this): Isn't it ironic that we ignore those who like us, fawn over those who we like yet are ignored by the ones we like...

I don't know but it was something like that. But I was reminded of it by your poem. Good job.

xkatt