i was laughing the whole time

here i am once again! let's have an applause now! -insert applause here- thank you, thank you! lol, that was amusing tash. XD

This is a strange but funny post. You have an active, original imagination. I like your intro with the "rhino" and "hippo" comments. Someday when you have time I would like to know more about siapan.

It is always difficult to review poetry as the customary rules of grammar, spelling, sentence structure etc do not apply. A "humor" poem is particularly difficult to review

1. I like it

2. It seems to deal with the subject in a novel and interesting way.

3. It is short and gets to the point at once.

grammer, spelling, punctuation, structure are at the option of the creator.