the tone to this poem is sad, sick-of-life, and says i-don't-care-what-the-hell-happens..well-written..

You are the reason

Why I never

Want to be

Anything

Like

You.

Oh i love this. It's very powerful, the single words on a line and the imagery. I really love how you put 'i want to be so much better then you'.. amazing! :)

Rolliepollie44

I'm not crazy about this one to be honest. I don't see a lot of feeling here. I just don't see your style reflected in this piece.

Love,

Dia