I loved the ending scene, it was nice to now that they would be together in the future and I absolutely loved your story it was so sweet! The ending was not cliche, well it was in a sense that the best friend and the brother ended up together, but in this story it was under a different circumstance, which I though made it different from other stories with the best friend and sibling. I hope you get what I'm trying to imply LOL. But great story!

good story well done thanks.

is there gonna be an epilogue?

I mean.

Obviously it's great by its own...

but yeah.

I absolutely loved this story. I read it all in one sitting. I would love to read a sequel to it, to show how they both deal with being apart, and then seeing their reunion. Maybe even his struggle to return to the military or quit. Loved it though!

hey i love your story but how does it end? does he come back? do they live happily ever after? so many open ended questions...

I LOVED it.

I was really worried that by ending when Dorian left you would leave an almost cliffhanger, but I love the way you ended it.

I've really enjoyed reading this story. Every time I got a chapter alert I would drop everything I was doing to go read. I'm serious! A lot of homework got neglected! And now I should be finishing a college application.

As soon as I finish this review; I'm going to find your other stories.

It's been fun reading this.

I can't wait to read more or your stories.

And yes, you really did change my view of the military for the better.

I absolutely loved this story, and I am pretty sad that it ended. You are an amazing writer!

Emily

That was a beautiful ending. It all (sort of) came full circle. It was well-written as always; good job! Thanks so much for providing me with sensible entertainment (and a damn good read) for the past few months. Is it too much to ask for more? Like, another story for when he comes back? It ended too soon, I tell you (that's why I said sort of). Anyway, I will certainly check back in a few for your edited version. Good luck, and I hope you have more stories like this for me to look forward to!

naw, thats so sweet, great job!

So I have to review this again, because I just thought of something. If Dorian is stationed at Camp Pendleton, he would most likey be flying into san Diego. not LAX, because Pendleton is a San Diego base.

I have to say... It was a wonderful ending and I liked the way it did end. Now this line "micro example of their relationship; an appearance of indifference that hid a deeper attraction, which manifested itself into quiet moments of affection." Um that blew my mind! What a great and powerful line! I literally said Wow after reading it for the second time cause I had to go back over a second time to be blow away properly!

So your writing rocks, the idea and story was amazing and I am sad it has come to an end. But good job!

Oh come one you can not just leave a cliff hanger that big.

Sriously its a law somewhere. I dont want to have to actually use my imagination to figure out whats going to happen.

I mean does he get injured and come back, think his not man enough.

Does she move on, he comes home, they fight but ultimately end up together

Does she receive news of his death and move on only to find his alive.

Seriously my minds running rampant on me and i cant keep up.

Either write a sequal... or write a sequal.

The end XD

omg i loved your story i realy hope you write a sequel

I enjoyed the ending. Not too sappy, and pretty realistic. I'll admit that I am hoping for a sequel. Lovely story.

i loved it! :DD

there's gonna be a sequel right?

i beg you, please :]]