Hun, as much as I liked your other story
This one is making no sense to me
At all... =/
I feel stupid

this one seems so..different--obviously because of the characters--but also the way its written. It's still great, inspiring, slightly confusing, but just as great as the first one. I can't wait to read the rest.

We were just talking about that sinario in math class the other day. If something bad happened, would you really want to know during school in a text, instead of from the office?

Some people said that they'd want to know by text, so that they could just leave the school in a hurry if needed. Others said it'd kill them to find out during classes.

Wish I could comfort Luke. Poor guy is going through a lot at once.

Nicely written, and I'm starting to really get a grip on the characters, little by little.

Great chapter

oh i feel so bad for this guy but i dnt really know him. Thats got to be shocking though. i really cant wait to find out wat happens next

great chapter

I'm getting a bit confused as the story goes on. You see, I have a memory equal to that of a goldfish, or a very old person.

Too many characters at once for me XD. I was going through mental overload, thinking, "Who is that again? Does this have to do with that?" I suppose that I should look over the first chapter again to try and clear my mind up.

XD

Well, it was quite emotional. Very angsty near the end there.

woah i didnt expect that!Can you say drama. I can't wait for you to update cuz this is getting good

I love the new characters, but I hope we'll get to hear from the Hate Me leads sometime soon, I'm kinda missing them. Anyways, this story is going so great already! Please update soon!

Hate Me is a really great story and i am pretty sure that MNU would not disappoint me. All the best!!

I'm super dee duper dee excited about the next chapter. I shall be waiting full of anticapation. (wow, rocky horror picture show flash back) Any way.
peace love happiness

okay im a little bit confused oh nevermind ii get it this isnt raylin its her little sis sorry had them confused and now that i get it the whole thing makes more since and its cool

IT'S UP IT'S UP IT'S UP!

._. . Hello my friend, we meet again!

It is very different from Hate Me. I feel much, much less hostility, more love than anything (well, atleast good-hearted caring). Are there going to be many flashbacks?

If I come across something, I'll let you know. I'll look back to the descriptions of them some time.

I'm alerting!

Love the start. Keep on updating! Where's Raylin by the way?