Hmm, I have to say. This was a very confusing opening, you tried to cram in as much exposition in the first few paragraphs as possible and for the first-time reader the world you have created can be somewhat perplexing.

I found a few spelling and grammar errors. Nothing major, but things like [she wasn’t found of him,] where it should be fond.

You have also spelt Panic wrong at the end of your summary, and your summary is *key* getting people to read. Occasionally you have a bit of tense confusion, with things like
[Element Trolling Disarray is when a Troller can’t control a their power and it gets out of control.] Where rest of the story is in past tense this present tense statement doesn't fit.

On the flipside, once you got the dialogue running between Ali and Dell it was much easier to read, and seemed to flow much better. It also shows a bit of bravery and imagination in forming a whole new world with which you can play around. Kudos to you.

Umm, and your question at the end... Way. That's the only one I can remember :P I think.