 lostsocks18 2009-01-22 . chapter 1I really liked this. And I can relate to it to a certain context. And I beleive you're right in that everyone always leaves at somepoint, physically or emotionally. And its odd, because I don't usually like rhyming poetry but with this piece it works really well and I like the format a lot. Awesome job! Maybe you'll find someone who will see beyond the fake smile? All the luck! Write on! |
 A Sweet Escape 2009-01-19 . chapter 1It's not really that well written, but I can deff. feel the emotion and I can relate a little. Yearning for people to know the truth and to accept or comfort you about it is something that I think everyone must go through sometime in their life. I'm sorry if this is happening to you now, just hang in there and things will turn out all right (this coming for the girl who's been through almost all of it).
Good poem.
xkatt |