"Flock of birds migrating above your bed." I found the imagery here really stunning and captivating!

"It is the scorched panorama of your mind that we are fleeing from." Your writing here is very mature--keep it up! :)

"Barbed cacti." Nice diction!

"Joshua trees." BEAUTIFUL!

This poem is so well-written and emotionally vivid. Bravo!
-Isca