i really liked this. Oddly enough right at the end up this when I read the line "my heart still beats" this song started playing on my playlist that starts out with the sound of a beating heart. so... that was creepy. but anyways. lol. umm... i really liked the lines "all my loving was for naught(drat, you’re still hot)" because it's just something a real girl would say, and it made me laugh. keep writing :)