Very intriguing story. I am interested. Keep writing!

OMG, I'M A FOURTEEN-YEAR-OLD WRITER TOO! Yay! Another one! That's -gets out calculator- two good writers my age. Seriously, you are a good writer. Maybe if you were to make your chapters a bit longer and update more often...I know, I'm no one to talk...it might satisfy your customers even more. Can't wait until the next chapter when it comes, and, well, actually I hope my review helps motivate you like they motivate me.

Curiosity kills...how long have you been writing?

Dun...dun...dun... What will become of Janelle? What will happen next? Will you update? Why am I asking all these questions? lol. Please update soon! )

Suspenseful. Please write more soon. )