Nice word choice, flows well, and has that 'deeper' meaning when a person cares to look for it. Can't say that I bothered looking for flaws.Well written.

I just wanted to say 'Hello' before I go onto the review :)

1: "Burlesque flowers veiled in sarcasm." What a phenomenal way to describe a trachea! Wow! "It was only every so often you'd speak bullets." Relatable. Sharp imagery. "A man of small mind." A very philosophical and captivating ending to the first section.

2: "You are a minotaur." Oh, I love mythological creatures! :D It also makes me think of Dante's seventh level of hell, which is guarded by the Minotaur. "You take what you feel is your own." That line really illustrates the belief that some egocentric people have that they're better than everyone else.

3: "I am the sum of all my parts." This part was particularly creative, as you twisted Descartes' philosophy, and made it your own :). "Everything you touch is...a mess of skewed perceptions." Absolutely brilliant!

-Isca