Haha, I love this piece! It just kind of leads in aimless cirlces and gives the reader the same sense of hopelessness that you seemed to have while writing this.

[Likewise goes for unrequited love, the crushing abyss of life, and anything remotely involving flowers.]

Great line. It feels rushed like the narrator's thoughts, so I can hear a very clear voice in it.

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i really enjoyed this
nice job :)

An interesting look at the night sky, and very true when considered. Great poem!

haha this one was amusing. good job.