Cool! I WANT THAT ROOM! Hehe.

WHY ISN'T THERE MORE! It says you haven't updated since last year! I WANT MORE!

I actually really loved this opening chapter; why isnt there a second yet?

Bailey seems like a really funny sort of girl, very honest with her parents. And I sense this story will be a student/teacher? Love those stories!

I really like this beginning. It has a lot of character and shows a lot of what Bailey is going through. I'm excited to see where this whole thing goes.

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I like the turn this story is taking, of course there are unimportant grammatical errors and breaks, but nothing to freak out over. I like how her "smart" almost somewhat nerdy personality is showed by mentioning all the school work she does, but not for any reason except for being bored (Or at least, that's what I got out of it) and I especially loved the way you described her room...I want that room...