um, huh? i think this is from the point of veiw of a bird in the sahara or somewhere around there right? and apparently it got either eaten or captured??

you stole this idea from me jerkface! [angry2] (haha you don't know what that looks like!)

anyways.. I came on here looking for how to spell your last name.. not creepy.. and by the time you get this it'll be too late anyways.

So.. ya, um I already told you this in class but, I'm jealous, mine didn't turn out this good! stupid flutering butterflies and vine swings and water..

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Very good prose! original, creative, and fantastic! good work!