All I can say is...WOW...and DAMN YOU! Now I HAVE to keep reading...I'm really enjoying this story...ALOT...so yeah...keep it up...as always...I love you...great writing...it is illegle to lick doorknobs on ther planets...and all that jazz

Of course I'm your bff again...I love your story so far and I can't wait to read more...I love the pictures that are put into my head with the way you describe things, it keeps me wanting more! This is definitely one of my favorites...

Now I'm addicted, I can acctually feel Erica's pain...good visuals, but make sure to double check grammer and spelling, otherwise it was AMAZING!

Ep. The ending italics! A Repo song! Woo. I really like this. It's coming along great. There's this movie called The Secret. It's kinda like this. A mother unaware of her daughter's secret life. But, anyway. I dig this.

Nine.

I really like the way this one is coming. The mystery of Ariel's life is gonna be pretty sweet. :D

Damn this is a good story. The first part about life being a movie was what brought me staright into the story! Vey good.

Hope you can read my series. :D

Sincerly Alice

very dramatic start! I like it. I think some of the descriptions of blood and tears seemed a bit redundant veering on purple prose, but I can definitely see why you wrote it the way you did. that being said, my favorite line was definitely the last one. it makes me want to read more; I love it!

keep up the great work and please post more soon :)

hey! I'm not signing in, but this is written from LJ :) I like the quote starting it off. it sort of sets a tone but keeps things mysterious.

did you make the quote up or did you hear it somewhere?