| Reviews for Being The Submissive One |
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Narq 1/22/09 . chapter 1OK, this is cute... and harmless, so great job |
Fayre Meira 1/22/09 . chapter 1you know, i gotta be honest with you - I'm not that fond of m/m.,, i don't know - i'm weird that way, just as i'm not too fond of f/f. but you wrote this story really, really, really, well. and I almost died from all the fluff. loved it. perhaps you could write something like this, but for f/m? pretty pretty please? hehe |
ProudGay 1/21/09 . chapter 1Well, since you said please... :D I liked it! Typical, fluffy, and cute! I would actually prefer Adam though, Nicky seems a lil too girlish for me. Also, your story is well written (unlike mine xD), but I think the characters should have a lil more depth, because it felt a little plain. But overall, cute! Great work! :D |